Hollow for you,

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See! what I have done.

Pity yell~ow drops did still etch your godly name…

It made it remain, you know fate.

Trust the dead at least.

At least one from doing any more feat.

Now I know I can see

Fate was not in for me.

When two persons draw apart.

One has to fall apart.

Fate dropped its finger at me mischievously.

But I – I am the antagonist of my own reality

 I carried you and  faced it far.

Waves hitting, tornadoes blooming as I look afar.

 It was for some time eventually.

Carving out hollow eventually.

Do such people remain unfixed for a thousand years?

Tis’ good but the effect just wears.

What I see now is don’t know why but thuds true.

To align to remain to stay there  n behind.

Never moved a step from  ‘sorrow’  n inclined.

There was always a  line of chalk,

Thin but it was easy, shouldn’t have taken a back walk.

So,  relinquished slowly numbly..

 But before any time  this final heave.

Know that I had space some more room..

But I remained by a choice not a request.

Hollow till the end.

And- AhHh……….

…….. 

Inside a tornado unfurling,

Its as still as..

Death(d)

Almost empty

Almost hollow.

~Kunjal.G

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22 thoughts on “Hollow for you,

  1. I really liked this piece! It had a hint of darkness and desperation which you carried on really well throughout the piece. Great work!
    Thanks for mentioning my name here! You both are doing a great job and it’s so nice to see your blog flourish. Congratulations on your achievement! I hope you continue with the success, here and in your lives as well. You both have a wonderful day ❤

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