
See! what I have done.
Pity yell~ow drops did still etch your godly name…
It made it remain, you know fate.
Trust the dead at least.
At least one from doing any more feat.
Now I know I can see
Fate was not in for me.
When two persons draw apart.
One has to fall apart.
Fate dropped its finger at me mischievously.
But I – I am the antagonist of my own reality
I carried you and faced it far.
Waves hitting, tornadoes blooming as I look afar.
It was for some time eventually.
Carving out hollow eventually.
‘Do such people remain unfixed for a thousand years?‘
Tis’ good but the effect just wears.
What I see now is don’t know why but thuds true.
To align to remain to stay there n behind.
Never moved a step from ‘sorrow’ n inclined.
There was always a line of chalk,
Thin but it was easy, shouldn’t have taken a back walk.
So, relinquished slowly numbly..
But before any time this final heave.
Know that I had space some more room..
But I remained by a choice not a request.
Hollow till the end.
And- AhHh……….
……..
Inside a tornado unfurling,
Its as still as..
Death(d)
Almost empty
Almost hollow.
~Kunjal.G
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Heyy everyone. Happy October! we couldn’t post because we were working on something for this blog! And secondly thank you everyone for following our blog. We have got 50+ followers 😃😃 Thank you everyone for supporting us!! and dropping nice comments😃 Some people were, Riya, AB Bhaiya, Naomi, Jan SumaReddy , Your writeups as well as your comments both were and continue to be inspiring!! And to the many people whom we connected via their blogs( which are many people!😃) Thank you everyone( truly!!)
~ DuoDisseminators
This was truly beautiful ❤️❤️ and congratulations on 50+ followers 🙂😊
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Welcome Bhaiya!
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I really liked this piece! It had a hint of darkness and desperation which you carried on really well throughout the piece. Great work!
Thanks for mentioning my name here! You both are doing a great job and it’s so nice to see your blog flourish. Congratulations on your achievement! I hope you continue with the success, here and in your lives as well. You both have a wonderful day ❤
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Thank you!! it was meant to sound dark with bitter truths during last moments of death!
thanks again!!
You too have a nice day!😃
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Wow! Congratulations on 50 followers! You guys totally deserve it. That poem is so deep and well written. Really loved it and thanks for mentioning my name!!💛
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Yours welcome!!!! and thanks!
double thanks!
No worries!! THnaks for reading our posts😃
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Good one this 🙂
And congratulations on hitting 50 🙂
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thanks!😃
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Congrats on 50+ followers, guys!! Here’s to many more 😍.
Lovely poem!
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Hi nehallll welcomeee!!!!
thank you😃
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🤩🤘half century!!
This poem is beautiful ❤💛 When two people draw apart atleast one falls apart🥺👏 Genius!!! Proud of you!
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Thank you!!! Riya!!🤩
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Congratulations on getting 50+ followers dear..! Many more followers to go for your unique blog..!🎉🎉
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Thanks filarance!
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You’re very welcome dear..!✨✨
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great poem!!!
congrats on 50 followers both of youu!!!! You deserve this and so much moree!!! keep writing you two!!
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thanks akshita!!!
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Beautiful lines. And congratulations for 50 followers.
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thank you Priti! 😃😃
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😂😂😇😄
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Interesting poem
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