
Hello this is Khushi. Today I am penning a poem describing how free soul feels crippled when it is constrained. How it feels the force of being shut down…
Amidst the dread of night, Seeing their constrained plight It sure did cry - freedom Hands forced to comply, Tears falling down as it cried Amidst the dead of night Compelled to follow norms, It felt stopped and muted, Seeing their constrained plight As it observed the caged minds, From the seamless sky, It sure did cry - freedom.
Also penned for prompt at: https://skepticskaddish.com/2022/08/17/w3-prompt-16-weave-written-weekly/ where poets were asked to pen a cascade. This was my first attempt at a cascade poem!
~Khushi.M
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Very heartfelt, Khushi
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That’s a good one Khushi! Good theme too.
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thank you vignesh!
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Very relatable, Khushi – and well executed!
~David
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Thank you david π
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Khushi, you have penned this with great empathy how heart wrenching it can be!
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Khushi and Kunjal,
I just wanna let you guys know that this week’s W3 is now live, and it’s open for new entries until Sunday morning (as usual)!
https://skepticskaddish.com/2022/08/24/w3-prompt-17-weave-written-weekly/
Much love,
David
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This was a good poem. You executed the form well
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thanks veera!
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Hi, you two β€
I just want to let you know that this week's W3 is now live, and it'll be open until Sunday morning, 10:00 AM (GMT+3).
I hope you can join us this week π
~David
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thank you david!π
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