Eyes on us.
Bars in front, bending down for breath.
One second to look up.
Hands covered with red circles.
Face torchlit with recent smacks.
Eyes gasping down in breaths.
They look up.
But no sight to see,
Travelers fading away-
The lone figure.
Written By- Kunjal Gupta
~DuoDisseminators
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This is a poem describing a lone injured man on the street. The picture given in the challenge- the eyes stare intensely into us. This prompted me to write a piece which questioned many people together, their willingness to bend down and help someone in need. This is written for sadje
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‘But. Before you leave. Help me stand up first‘
Hi Kunjal! Very interesting take. It questions our instinct to look away and whether we are willing to help.
This prompt is given by Sadje but you have linked it to my post in response to her prompt.
I am sharing her link here. https://lifeafter50forwomen.com/2022/05/02/what-do-you-see-132-may-2nd-2022/
You can follow her blog. Every Monday she posts this challenge.
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Thank you Poonam!π
Yes i have linked the post to sadje ‘s post.
Thank you for reading!
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Great! You are so welcome. π
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Very evocative poem Kunjal. Thanks for joining in
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Thanks for the challenge sadje!
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Youβre welcome
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π Appreciative applause π
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Thanks Veera!π
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Beautifully penned!
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Thank you so much dhriti!
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*applause!*
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Thank you David π
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