He is successful and desired. Ignored times -skewed in italics, The gleaming face had once perspired, Smile behind a mask of wrinkles . And she is successful and pretty. And she has tons of makeup, Just hanging over- a thinly veil, Over Ringed eyes, ugly red circles. . They look awfully suited in this moment Noting and recording their bare performance, But there were tons of rehearsals and torment. And - a Long tunnel-before the opening. . Shadows unhook in the dim of night, The ballerina leaps and crowds sway, Postures tried, cut out answers. Glasses clinch, roars of gay. . Fear, beads of sweat, knee quivers, They stand and raise the glass of the day, Teeth shearing cloth while writing, She is dressed in a gown of pearls. Habits tried, crumple, restart, He unconsciously checks the time, Nights black and dreary, They give a calm smile. A child before the mirror, Reciting the same verse, A man before the crowd, Dictating the same verse. Moments being sewed together, Celebrations and cries of joy, Cut out hands being put together To this day of glory and shine.
As you can clearly see, the alterations are between the past and the present. It is a chiaroscuro of past and present! We would leave the meaning upto you!
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This is great! 🙂
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David
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Thank you David 😃
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THat iS sucH A BeAuTIFul poem!!! You should honestly write poems more often guyyyyys!
Amazing post!
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Ahh thanks stara!!♥️😃
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This is awesome💕💕
You should definitely write more like these!!
Loved it🎀❤
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Thanks aayushi di!! 😃😃
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WoNDeRfUl PoEM!!
*I have no idea why I am typing like this 😂*
Loved it!! 🤩
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You must have read stara ‘ s comment 😃😂
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Wow! This is so authentic and beautiful! Wonderfully crafted words!💫
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Thanks Jan!!! 😃
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💕🤩ayy this has turned out beautiful!!! Amazing job kay!
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Thanks riya😃😃
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This is really amazing and beautiful…loved it!
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Hey candy!
Thankss😃😃🙂
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I found this poem interesting. Strong contrast between past and present.. mm, some beautifully crafted lines in there.
“Moments being sewed together,
Celebrations and cries of joy,
Cut out hands being put together
To this day of glory and shine.”
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Thanks Veera!! Glad it achieved its effect 🙂
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Thanks for reading😃
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