‘why do some people stay, even if you have moved ahead to the corner?’
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Sometimes I frown, all days I smile.
And meet everyone’s gleaming eyes.
But these stay, I avert one mile
Those Alarming two glinting eyes.
They stare for long, untamed, unmoved.
Oh! Just turn away, wear and unhook!
Like lice I feel them plucking insides,
Those Alarming two glinting eyes.
I stop this mow, try a new field.
Unhook from prance, look in those eyes.
They don’t stop, excitement rebounds.
Those Alarming two glinting eyes.
This stare today of all days
Unlike careless gazes of people, minding their own.
Those searching eyes,
Certainly a new look for me, they grind my insides.
~Kunjal Gupta
Hey this is Kunjal!
This is a Kyrielle( the first three paras) which is a French form of poem. Each line of the poem consists of eight syllables. There is repetition or refrain of one line throughout the quatrains ( stanza with four lines). A rhyme scheme like aabB will work in a Kyrielle.
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Ahhh I have never heard of Kyrielle so that makes this poem my first read of that form✌🏻
And the poem is soooo goooood, Kunjal💫🤍🤍
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thank you siya!
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lemme remember what i wrote the previous 2 times…
ahh right.. I lovvvvvvvvvvvvve this poem!!!! Reminds me of a pair of eyes i know😅💖
Imma try a kyrielle too it sound awesome!
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thank you riya!
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glad u received the comment!
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Never heard of Kyrielle, learned something new. Andddd this is an amazing poem. Loved it
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glad to know that!
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I too have never heard of Kyrielle..
Nonetheless, this was soo good kunjal!✨❤
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thank you!
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Awe-mazing Kunjal!❤❤
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thank you.
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Wow, I didn’t know what a Kyrielle was! How can you write so beautifully while maintaining the rhyme scheme, and the syllables!?
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thank you arnav! there are various forms of poetry
check some here: http://www.shadowpoetry.com/resources/wip/kyrielle.html
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Hmm Kyrielle sounds amazing! Never heard of it. The poem you guys have written-
Well its amazing-
Sooooo good-
So beautiful-
I loveeee this poem!
Well!
Amazing post!!!
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thank you stara!
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Beautiful 🤩; Well done 👍🏻
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thank you nabeeha!
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Ah it’s been a long time since I wrote a kyrielle or read one…this was a nice,enjoyable read. Those glinting eyes sure sound alarming! 🙂
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