Poem/prompt writing

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Hey everyone. This time we bring to you a poem that we wrote amidst conversing. In an easier way poem with a person. Just have a companion who shares with you the knack for poetry ( or wants to write poetry), and bring about a conversation in poetry. the conversation can be in depth on life, love, friendship or basically anything. We two found it is a great way to practise and and get in line with ‘poetic language’. Our first attempt wasn’t easy. Check this out.

Kunjal: Life,my life is smattered into colours of red and hue,

Red is not inspiring, hue of prolonging darkness,

I don’t know what to do. 

Khushi :At least in life u have colours by your side,

My life is dull and gray

Better a prolonging darkness 

Than the melancholy at the bay

Kunjal It seems you ‘re confused,

Riddled by emotions, you can’t seem to etch,

What you feel in parchments of white,

The truth, is still crushed inside,

You are not letting it out pure and right.

Pity, at least I know I am falling,

I know I aint trying,

I know I am falling, without calling. 

Khushi: Confusion is but a fleeting dream 

I have started to fall in love with chaos 

At least I know it will pay ear to my screams

When the world is trying to ignore me 

As I see dreams of breaking free in doss

Kunjal: Your misery is nowhere near mine then,

I shall bid you a good bye,

I am searching for the lovely souls,

Who are just slipping down the slope

It’s a good slip though,

I don’t have to try and cry 

To people who can’t listen to me,

To people who won’t

But at least i hope to find,

Likeminds. 

Khushi: Goodbye is a strong word isn’t it?

How easy it is for people to part 

When you say you wanna find likeminds

You ignore that each one of us is worlds apart 

What is life? What are likeminds?

There is no likeness in Mankind,

There’s only disturbance and difference 

Kunjal: What i mean by likeminds,

Is people who have been labelled,

By the same “chaos”

You have fallen in love with it.

Khushi: Ah! The chaos 

Yes People have been labelled I agree

But what you forget to see

Is that every person has a different chaos 

There’s A different storm in each cup of tea.

Kunjal: I shall tell you one more pick aint i?

 You are interpreting it all wrong,

That is what people of the dreamland do,

Guard them from their own wrong.

Khushi: No interpretation is wrong my friend

Its a symbol of the difference

That every person has their own thoughts ,

Every person his own way of existence

Kunjal: I hope i dont hurt you by saying this,

However you are already getting hurt and pinched.

It is not the thoughts we see, the actions we do

Then tell your own people to do what they think.

Khushi: Don’t worry I dont get hurt anymore

The world has done this to me 

Made me learn to be strong 

As they silence all my roars

I agree what you say is right

And let’s not talk about the conflicts

All it does is start a fight 

Kunjal: The world,hah what a joke.

It has taught me differently, sorry to say.

Taught me that those who slip away,

Aint have a chance to find their way.

So, I am doing as they say.

Khushi: oh well my friend I am a rebel,

I don;t run or slip away

Its just now being inviolable has become my song

Kunjal: Dear, you aren’t not a chance,

Slipping away.

It is me who is and I aint to stop it.

You just found love for your misery,

And I just found hate.

It is simple isn’t it?

Hah you can never win, 

And I ain’t eager to continue.

This world can’t listen the feeble argument of the weak,

Here it is you.

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So, how do you feel about this exercise. would be happy to know below. Ours was not a perfect attempt. But it was enjoyable and fun along with learning. So find a companion and do poetry writing with them. A convo for a start?

~DuoDisseminators

21 thoughts on “Poem/prompt writing

  1. payojachauhan

    Lovely. I need to start such a conversation with my friends as well. 🤣
    But anyways the perspectives of both the speakers have been expressed beautifully and with symbolism. Just adore it to the core. 💕
    Love
    Payo

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      1. Agreements and disagreements are all a part of it. Sometimes the backstage fight is what you need to clear the air (or as an excuse to break the other’s nose, haha).

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  5. I just discovered your blog and OML Y’ALL ARE TALENTED ASF. That poem sounds so beautiful, it has that deep meaning in it. I’m definitely trying this out with my friends and if it comes out good, I’ll tag y’all while posting it on my blog!
    I really really loved this one, heading over to reading more posts <33

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    1. Oh Oh Oh LILI Heyy!!! Thank you. And we are very glad that you will try this up with your pals too!( ~~A great feeling~~now now😅😂)
      ( Do post it on your blog! and then maybe you can post the link here)
      We tried this challenge the second time:
      https://duodisseminator81314070.wordpress.com/2021/09/01/poem-prompt-writing-2/
      Hope you like it!
      Read our other posts too. We would be happy to know how you feel!
      Some poems from our blog:
      https://duodisseminator81314070.wordpress.com/2021/08/18/night-as-i-see/
      https://duodisseminator81314070.wordpress.com/2021/07/31/the-door/
      https://duodisseminator81314070.wordpress.com/2021/08/26/advices-or-vices/

      And there are other posts too! Would be happy to know your views
      ( so much exaggeration and a long reply but anywayz😂)

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